Wednesday, December 08, 2004

The Doomening

"You will never poop again," the alien said.

Sara stared at it and wondered how it had gotten in the stall, since the creature was at least eight feet tall, and broad. It loomed over her as she sat on the toilet. "But that's something people need to do," she said. But even as she said it, she could feel a warmth below. Her sphincter was fusing together, and she was doomed.

1 Comments:

Blogger Murf said...

Oh dear. I was thinking about doing some Flash shorts based on some of your Last Lines, but this one? Whew. Boy. Let me try to catch my breath.

7:40 AM  

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